"Am I Evil?" - Sound Interesting to anyone?

[Rob Zombie]

I've a fairly long history of shamelessly plugging my work on forums and trying to recruit a few people to give me some much needed critique on them, so I'll keep this post short    I've just put a couple of chapters of a story up on my DeviantArt page, which when I first wrote it had some good reviews from some of the older guard on Shartak. If it sounds interesting to you, I'll ask you read the first couple of chapters and see if you want to read on and give me some constructive feedback.

The story is about a necromancer, forced into exile since the burning of the rest of his 'order'. Hopefully it's a bit creepy, a bit dark fantasy, and has heavy overtones of exploring the nature of good and evil, and thier constant struggle or something or other  
So, not to clutter the form with useless drivel, I'll link you to it.

http://redbalfour.deviantart.com/art/Am-I-Evil-Chapter-1-126213170
http://redbalfour.deviantart.com/art/Am-I-Evil-Chapter-2-126214460
http://redbalfour.deviantart.com/art/Am-I-Evil-Chapter-3-126424105
http://redbalfour.deviantart.com/art/Am-I-Evil-Chapter-4-126769411

At the top of the piece there are formating options, to add in the indentations of paragraphs, make the background black and the text white or make the text bigger. I'll just let myself out now...might plug it on IRC later. It's been that long since I've written something that I just had to plug XD

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Very good story Rob, can't wait to see new additions to it.

[snico]

oh my gosh its awesome!  it reminds me of some of Stephen King's stuff, like The Gunslinger or Eye Of The Dragon.  I can't wait to read more!

[Rob Zombie]

Part four is up now, and thanks, if you've made it this far. This is when the magic happens 

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Getting better every chapter, keep up the good work Rob.